Wednesday, January 16, 2008

MSU's Young Gun


Michigan State has played questionably in the last week. they scored a mere 36 points last weekend and squeaked out a win against the Ohio State Buckeyes Tuesday night. Freshman Kalin Lucas scored thirteen including three big buckets late.

Wojnowski's point is that MSU has a young freshman that knows how to play and has the ability to be a great player. But for MSU to win big games this year, they need to play better and more consistent.

If I were writing this column towards and audience consisting of 9th grade P.E. students, I would "dumb" the article down a bit. Wojo uses words like meld, doldrums and fret to express his point. Words like include, inactivity, and worry could be used to replace the words he uses to express his point to an older crowd. Wojnowski's writings are very basic and easy to read, but sometimes he throws in that technical word that cannot be understood.

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